Edit Plan 2

After the tutorial we all decided to go to the edit suite and all listen to all the interviews and then we each chose our favourite quotes from the interviews. We then compiled a list of all the best quotes, and discussed which ones could work well. This way of choosing a narrative involved the team much more and was a much better idea than me and Noah choosing like our rough cut.

After we'd heard everyone's opinions me, Oli and Noah discussed what would work best as actual interviews and what would work as sound bites for the intro and built up a new narrative that way. With collaborative input from the whole group we were able to create a much better narrative I think, and our new shot sequence was a much better and more comprehensive cut of the interviews.

This new story felt like it gave it more of a story, the shots linked into one another well and everyone agreed it seemed to flow better than the first one. I also put forward the idea of changing the end to a very light hearted note. Tristan in one of his interviews mentions how they expect new street art to be amazing and how everyone will love it but it could just have some boobies drawn on it so they'll have a laugh. I felt like this was a great quote to end on because it's unexpected so the childish comedy of it comes across well while it still mentions the problem of graffiti covering other graffiti. This light-hearted end is the kind of thing I think Lee mentioned with the looks down camera etc; we took it a bit further but for the piece I think it ends it in a memorable and positive way.

This is the sheet with all the interviews best quotes on, numbered and ticked off the ones we are going to use in the actual edit.

The other side of the quote shit covering the remaining interviews.

Here are the finalised edit notes, basically just the numbers in order